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[cl0ckw0rkf0x]

Day one, in which our hero is captured and tortured into confessing that he believes in the messiah.

2717 words by midnight.

Comments

[bnbalder.livejournal.com]

Oh, that sounds like an action-filled chapter!

[lindenfoxcub.livejournal.com]

It kind of is. I've been focusing on trying to get more emotion across in my writing - it seems to be what editors I respect have criticized most in my writing. So this was a challenge, but I'm pleased with how it turned out. I might post it on my writing filter on LJ, but I don't have many people on it, and no one ever comments on my writing on LJ anyway. It'll go up on the OWW eventually though.

[my-lovers-eyes.livejournal.com]

Wow, I'm impressed!